 Night-Rayne 2009-06-13 . chapter 13this story just gets more and more interesting... |
 meechiyel 2007-06-24 . chapter 13 Hey! Where's the update? I'm pulling my hair out from the lack of more of this story. It's been great so far, and I really hope you can continue it. |
 RYTwinDemon 2007-02-05 . chapter 13Hehe... I like Jynx's new name. XD Suits her. Love your story, by the way. Please continue it! |
 Emily 2007-01-23 . chapter 1 One of the best stories I have read on here! Update soon! You better not make her ended up at the church again. |
 meechiyel 2007-01-15 . chapter 13 It might be better to do Bailey's past since you already told us about Kael. Keep up the good work! The story is great; I'm mostly likey going to be checking every day in hopes of an update.
Meech
PS. It would also be interesting to find out about Aren... |
 atreyu love 2006-08-16 . chapter 3^^ nice |
 atreyu love 2006-08-16 . chapter 1i read this awhile ago.. but im gonna read it again ^^ |
 sciagraphus 2006-04-28 . chapter 13oh please continue this story! i know i got o it late and all, but i really love all the charries and the setting and so much else...and i think my fav pairing would have to be Rhys and Aren. *wicked grin* |
 sciagraphus 2006-04-28 . chapter 12i like this chapter, even if you don't! *pout* Aren just keeps getting cooler. was he forced into prostitution? =D |
 sciagraphus 2006-04-28 . chapter 11wow, you really had me going for awhile there. Aren's so cool... And why can't she start to fall for all three of them? *wicked grin* |
 sciagraphus 2006-04-27 . chapter 10aw, i LIKE Kael. =D Did Aren really give away her big secret? :(it's getting really exciting... |
 sciagraphus 2006-04-27 . chapter 9wow, she has balon saying she has no choice but to join the clergy, and rhys saying she must join the thieves. complicated little girl, ain't she? |
 sciagraphus 2006-04-27 . chapter 8e! i like this chappie, even if you don't. :D |
 sciagraphus 2006-04-26 . chapter 7o! now it's getting really exciting! |
 sciagraphus 2006-04-26 . chapter 6oh, that was really cool. the pace really picked up for the chase sequence, too. and the red-head was really spooky. :) |