Ek! All your chapters are so short but so good. Really, it's not fair to keep readers hanging. Lol...j/k, you're doing a great job.

i like it alot. i love historical fiction. i'm sure it wil progressively become more intriging but i liked it. it's starting out good and informative about "sean" 9i luv the name sean, long story) keep going, good work

Well written but the chapter is too short. make them longer.

Excellent. You portrayed the attitude of the man very well. Might want to consider making your chapters longer though. Keep up the good work!

An interesting start, keep it going.

This could be an interesting story, and I hope you continue with it soon.

Ah this story seems like it'll be good. :-)