Reviews for The Cards You've Been Dealt

trustAnti 2003-03-30 ch 1,	abuseJesus, girl. Those are the most impressive footnotes I've read since Lewis Carroll. Stanza I is my favorite (always a sucker for Jacks) - though the fourth line halted me the first few times I read through it. Capitalizing 'They' helped refocus the emphasis of the sentence, and let it flow correctly. Well done. Absolutely dug Stanza II for the world play and third line. It fit together nicely. The fourth stanza is quite hypnotic, but the last line seems oddly thrown in. "Wordplay, tempo, alliteration.. SENTIMENT!" It rather jumps out at you. Considering the idea behind the poem, and the intended deliverance, I suppose it suits its purpose. Heh. Suits. -Very- nicely done.
sitaloire 2003-03-26 ch 1,	abuseJACKIE. You make me die inside! This poem is so loffly that it kills me with envy! >=O You dreadful girl, STOP WRITING SO WELL. You real, darling. Huffs
Autumn tears 2003-03-24 ch 1,	abuseWow. I really liked the poem, but the explanation at the bottom made it one of my favorites!
Untame Spirit 2003-03-24 ch 1,	abuseExcellent! I was a bit confused at first...and then I found the footnotes. :) Well thought, well planned, and well written. I enjoyed it.