another beautiful but say write!

Well written. I personally tend to seek solitude. I'm quite disgusted and depressed by the human race and its "accomplishments".

gah, again extremely painful but this one i like best outta the lil streak ive been reading for some reason, seems that theres a lil more here, maybe a deeper sense of helplessness then the others? anywayz, beautifully done

i feel the same way buti have never been able to put it into such strong words...i love it! by the way...thanks for reviewing my stuff it was greatly appreciated!

Pretty, excellent

I like it too. It is a bit of a cliche, but who really cares (literary magazine probably would...the bastards). Sorry, but I just hate them so much!

Anyway, like all of your poems, there were many themes going on that were all very stirring and powerful. The fact that it more or less ends in a question makes it even more interesting. Well done.

Hm ... this is tough. I guess it'd be different for everyone. Guess you gotta take control of your emotions instead of letting them take you on a rollercoaster ride. Of course sometimes, it's good to go on a rollercoaster ride, just not you don't have any control ... no one would like being shoved on one to around for hours and hours ... right? It's better to go on one when you want to.

Unfortunately, usually other people decide to do it anyway whether we like it or not ... but sometimes we gotta try our best to ignore ... but I'm assuming it's gonna be quite hard to ignore your father, if it's anything like I've experienced with a certain mother that's not mine... Anyway, my review is longer than your poem ... sorry. But I'm sure you don't mind ... at least I hope you don't ... gotta stop rambling ... right now.