  engelstar13 2005-10-23 . chapter 2 hey not bad, update soon k |
  Sea Cadet Girl 2005-06-12 . chapter 1You need to update this story. it is really good. Please update it. This may be my second review but it's only because i wanna find out what happens. |
 M L 2005-02-25 . chapter 2haha, Iasus: 1. Sabrina: 0. |
| Sea Cadet Girl 2004-12-03 . chapter 2 whoa! a sorta cliffhanger there. update soon plz. |
 Chardae 2004-08-08 . chapter 2cliffhangers are evil..update soon! |
 Mousey-Boi 2004-08-08 . chapter 2This one is not one of your better ones. Some grammar mistakes, too little description of the people and places, and at the end there her will to have sex with him, and what the demon is implying, aren't exactly convincing. Still, interesting idea, you should continue if you have the time. ^^ |
 Jahar 2004-08-04 . chapter 2UPDATE plez! Cool story |
 Kris 56 2004-04-28 . chapter 2Update soon! It's good! |
| >:-C 2004-04-17 . chapter 2 Amazing story, why'd you stop updating?!?!?!?!?!? |
| Alexandria 2003-09-16 . chapter 2 You have to update this it's such a good story so far! Email me the minute u have the story updated. I love the demon! |
| Morgan Anonymous 2003-09-04 . chapter 2 I liked the story. Demons are awesome. Our favorite half-demon, InuYasha... ^.^, anyway, i hope you continue soon, cuz i wanna see some more! |
 ShadowsMidnightScandal 2003-08-30 . chapter 2This is really good... hope you update sometime soon... |
 black velvet rose 2003-07-30 . chapter 2cool story please continue! |
 Trapped-Bird 2003-06-06 . chapter 2need...more... |
| Waiting 2003-06-05 . chapter 2 cool plot!
cant wait til next chapter! |
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