   Faerie Corpse 2004-08-10 . chapter 1Whoa, this is totally true. What an amazing poem. |
 Kaleidx 2004-03-30 . chapter 1Wow, very well written, despite some rhyming.. um.. abnormalties. Very good poem though! Loved the idea, something I bet many would relate to. |
 Emerald Wind 2003-05-19 . chapter 1Wow!! That's exactly the way I feel sometimes. I love this poem! |
 Untame Spirit 2003-04-04 . chapter 1That was great! I especially liked the flow.
Good job. |
 angelical nightmare 2003-03-26 . chapter 1wow neat way to phrase it. |
 Anagronax 2003-03-26 . chapter 1OOH!... Purdy!... And you're so right... |
 mommy 2003-03-26 . chapter 1 aw *hug* |
 Pardalis 2003-03-25 . chapter 1Very good... |
 hoellenwauwau 2003-03-25 . chapter 1wow, that was great. nice rhyme, too. loved it! |
| Mattaku 2003-03-25 . chapter 1 When the truth comes out, we all feel the same. It's really hard to realize just how weak you are, and how much alike you are to the people you hate. Your rhymes were great, very creative. I hope you write more. |
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