Reviews for Faint Lines of Distinction

anti*charm
2003-04-03
ch 1,

That was short and sweet. I'm a little confused with the indentation, but don't listen to me, I'm a grammar-and-spelling nazi.

Damn, I just can't find anything else that's wrong with this thing. It's lacking a chapter two, perhaps? Heh, heh. :)

I love how realistic the characters are. Keep it up.

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