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| AMM3485 2008-06-16 ch 30,  | abuseWhat a great story! You did an amazing job! |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-03-10 ch 29, | abuseAw, good job. I liked it :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseOh revenge of the angry boyfriend? Lol, can't wait to read more . |
| xXReader.Desu.YoXx 2008-03-03 ch 29, | abusewhat do i think?! o-m-g. thats the most cruelest story i've ever read. GR YOU RYAN! DAMN HIM!! that jerk deserve to rot. :D although this was at some leve happy & everything. i think having her live alone with a dog is very lonely. the last chapter could have been set maybe at her late eighties, happily married, with grandchildern but still loving Brian. gawd. this is like titanic. xcept worst because shes living her life alone! |
| xXReader.Desu.YoXx 2008-03-03 ch 25, | abusei read the 'quick break' chapter. Inspiring. Beautiful. Proud. Couraging. I dont think i can find the right word. |
| Basketball Barbie 2008-02-13 ch 20, | abusetheres a mistake with your german : sie werden niemals zufrieden sein. other than that great story so far! you may want to proof read though, there are some typos. :) |
| lost-pfreak23 2008-01-28 ch 30, | abuseoh, it was so sweet and sad... i loved it! you know your navy stuff very well. im impressed. it was very put together and neat! you had a wonderful plot line and writing style that kept me thoroughly entertained! |
| vanilla.twit 2007-12-07 ch 17, | abusegood! |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2007-09-06 ch 30, | abuseGAH,.. i feel like KILLING you. no happy ending?! r u kidding? no i need a happy ending romance. good stroy but i think the ending was a bit bad. BUT thats because i like happy endings |
| Genato 2007-09-05 ch 29, | abuseomg. first of all.. let me comment on the name.. it was perfect. although it sounded like ryan.. *sigh. oh wellz. and i didnt expet the ending.. i thought he was going ot show up.. *sigh*. the fic was good though with unexpected twists everywhere. it was a bit too short than my liking but it was great. really great. keep on writing. oh.. and i was touched by the poem.. it was just.. really really.. guilt=inducing (although i appreciate ALL soldiers and i don't disrespect my country intentionally..) and makes you think. overall.. it was a great fic. |
| ophelia 2007-08-22 ch 29, anon. | abuseomg wah...dat was soo depressing and sad... i liked it though but aw..y did he have to die..couldn't u have just killed ryan and saved brain??..make a sequal..he comes bak..and she finds out that he got away after all and those ashes were not really his..hehe..just a suggestion..and give it a happy ending..haha |
| A 2007-05-06 ch 20, anon. | abuseI really like this story but I would just like to tell you that part of your dutch was wrong and it would make a lot more sense if you changed it to "Ik zal deze morgen ochtend komen ophalen." |
| Erisah Mae 2007-04-11 ch 29, | abuseI love this, even the ending, although it has made me melancholic. I liked your mixture of languages that you used, and I thought your characterisations of Memory and Brian were really good. A few questions though... What does the title mean? what had Ryan done? And why on earth did you pick names for the two main male characters that rhymed? I really enjoyed this. Thankyou. Erisah |
| FadingLight88 2007-03-17 ch 30, | abuseOMG!! I'm crying!! I hate sad endings, but this was a great story! Please keep up the great writing!! |
| HoesOverBros 2007-03-13 ch 24, | abuseoh my god, i can't stop crying. |