I am taking an educated guess that you are american. If you were German (and I can say this, i am half German/English) you would probably be considered a Neo-Nazi...GROW UP! War Is Not Fun! PEOPLE DIE! And yea, I can comment very precicely about death, I work as a firefighter in my spare time. Tell me if you can still see things the same way, when you see your next smashed up, completely mutilated body. No one wins a war! Death can never be victory, both sides loose people and it is the civilians who suffer the most. Besides, if you were trying to take the moral high ground, look at Guantanamo Bay. I am sure most great terror and crime calls employ 15 year olds... (yes I did verify these facts). And I mean, come on, America STILL has the death penalty. Such a pitty its a superpower country...cyaDK

I wrote a poem similar to this after 9/11. Go patriotism! Thanks for the read.

erm...well your poem was o.k though the rythm was forced and you spelt cashes wrong,hmm...any how i have noticed you have all this hatred with in. The thing with you is you have talent and intellegence but you are so far up Bush's ** that his hole has blocked your vision with **. saying that well written poem.
Look around you, americans are the only ppl being killed.

awesome poem...while your rhyming seemed a bit forced, your message was as clear as day...and it's time these people realized that America is a superpower not because it imposes itself on the world, but because the world respects it and if America ever did something that was just totally, completely, and utterly wrong just to push pplz buttons, we would no longer be a super power because the world would pay no heed to us. So, solong as we have the majority of the world on our side (because they beieve we are right), we will always win. it's just the way the cookie crumbles. the world has their opinions and the U.S. is just their means of accomplishing what they think is right because they believe we're right. Awesome poem and keep writin..:)
~*MeZ*~

Okay, this is interesting. I think it just reinforced my beliefs that the majority of the population sees this country as a huge bully that will win every fight it gets involved in, regardless of whether or not it should be involved.

ooh, and talking about ill-informed and immature...i think this one speaks for itself. "we didn't want this fight?" why did the evidence passed unnoticed, then? could it be, perhaps, that bush wanted a reason to go on a middle-eastern crusade? just possibly.

Maybe this would be a little more touching if we weren't killing innocent civilians too. Funny how them killing our civilians is a tragedy and us killing theirs is merely retaliation. Closed-minded glee about bloodshed is just so sickening and frankly, I'm tired of it. I've read some of your other hand-fed lies and mindless patrioticism, and quite frankly, you sicken me. Do you have anything to write about aside from kissing this nation's **? You love America, you love Bush, we get that. Now write something worthy of our time.
~Kaz

Hooah! This is awesome! I believe that's the sum of my feelings on this poem. I know I'll probably be hated for a greeing with you, but I don't care. I'm Pro-war any how. How come we have to tolderate the pacifist people (Who I, for the most part, have no problem with) but they can slash at us? Well inmy opinion, these peopel struck first and we have a right to strike back. You're right on with this.

Well, I could pretend it was good, but that would be lying... and like you said, don't lie.
Ok, it sucked. THere you go, I am being completely honest with you.
Btw, did you know, that now the US has destroyed the Taliban, they've handed control of Afghanistan back to the warlords that ensured the rise of a regime like the Taliban in the first place? It's all politics you see, now that Bush is busy with Iraq, Afghanistan doesn't matter any more. So before all you stupid wanks, I'm sorry, I mean, Yanks, go around preaching your righteousness and justifications in freeing a nation ruled by terror, just remember, your government only interferes with other countries sordid affairs when it suits their own popularity polls and morbid fantasies.

the rhyming sounded a little forced and the wording fairly primitive but nervertheless, it was a good poem, that expressed your feelings wonderfully. good job, you should try writing some more poems, with a bit of practise your style might flourish...

Yeah! Good poem, I like it!

Outstanding! Brillant!

Unoriginal, immature, offbeat, anal-retentive and you spelled Cassius wrong.

Cool

I think you've mispelled Cassius Clay. You've tried a bit hard for the rhymes in this one ('fight...we won't take you light'). I really don't like jingoist 'we're gonna smash you' style war poems. They lack imagination.