WOW...thats all i can really say...WOW. um dont get upset but i really dont understand alot of whats going on here except maybe the war and what i thought were oil compaines...ie the piggies...am i way off base?

My girlfriend directed me to this poem, and read it to me... I have to say that I was at a loss for words. This is absolute beauty in its purest form. It's like a song, flowing freely with the most painful emotions fighting their way out... and succeeding. If you haven't heard of Otep (a band) you need to go to her site (w.otep.com) or find her lyrics... especially for House of Secrets. It reminds me of this poem... just as powerful as a song, just as beautiful as a verse. Amazing work.

Damn. *applauds* I like very much. I have a poem similar to this, called "The King and I" about something similar. You should check it out. You have been added to my list of favorites. I liked the disorganization and the frantic mood of this...made it all that more powerful.

Hey! I really like this poem, it's excellent. Very well done!

this is kinda of an interesting poem i might haf to read it several times till i get the really feel of it
and i really like depressiong stuff

LOL! i like it a lot!

Oh... this is deep. I mean if I was not depressed before I read this piece then I most certainly am now... a provokative (sp?) statement.

Jade