I really liked this because I can relate to the feeling, and you put the emotion into words so well.

I think that was a great poem.

I love how it rhymes. You dont seem to be stretching at all for a word that fits.

Cool poem! I have often thought that I could kill someone who was to do that to me. BTW I can't seem to post a review for Insomniac at 3:53 AM so I'll say that it describes Insomnia perfectly. I still reckon that all poets are born poets and are also born with insomnia ^-^

- Crucified Sanctity -

that poem is so relevent to me at the moment- stupidly, i offered some friends aid with their work. now they want me to do everything, and do their best to insult me if i refuse to do all the work they should be doing. the urge to slash them across the face is nearly to strong to control >:(

Needless to say, this speaks for me as well.
* I don’t think I’d like the taste.*
Especially that line.

And I liked this more than words can say.

This is a good poem...better than anything that I could do. Poor you, with such a nasty boss...'k 'k, I really liked the poem, it's clear, and it has an excellent rhythm.

::nods:: I have a few people that I would like to recite it to. ::grins evilly:: This is a very nice peice of work, and I'm sure we could ALL relate to it in some way.
Thank you for reviewing my poem! It meant alot to me! I really like this poem.. so much, in fact... ::adds to favorites:: wee hoo.

Good poem.

It's got the bitterness you mentioned, but I also feel a bit of sarcasm and humor to it. Like the speaker is angry but knows well enough not to let it consume her. I think the two lines "I don't think I'd like the taste," and "I might break my teeth" illustrate this the most.

Wow. Bitter, but nice poem. Good use of repetition. Good job.

The poem is very bitter. Makes me say 'Ouch' while reading it...It brings out the pain and hatred (that you have towards your boss? =) ). Well written.

Wow. Thats all i have to say.

So true...

Great.. Nice rhyming but i think you shouldnt bother too much about your boss.. I still like your 'Immortality' poem.. Keep writing, I'll be waiting..