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| Luna H Lovegood 2004-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseIt's very... ahem... interesting. And expressive. |
| Namir Swiftpaw 2003-12-18 ch 1, | abuseInteresting piece...I like how you set it up. The little schpeel you wrote about the kind of reviews you give just about made my heart leap. It is nice to know that there are people out here who give critique. Anyway, I like your rhyme scheme, even if it is a little wonky at times. It's the wonkiness (I love that word) that gives the piece its charm. Keep writing! ~Namir Swiftpaw |