very good. nice words of choice. please read and review some of my stuff also.

it brought tears to my eyes! this is really good; if you are a musician you could turn it into a song.

Interesting, deep...I love and can truly empathize with these lines:

"So vulnerable I am when you tell me you love me, when you help me fly,
yet if you leave no sad tears for you would I allow myself to cry.
So quick to act with vengeance and its sweetness in my veins,
yet I cannot hold the grudge for I'm so frightened of the pain.
Where do I have to go?
My sarcastic tone no longer is amusing."

I love the setup of the poem, how you placed "I" last sometimes, how the anger, the hurt, the truth of "who I am" just flowed so honestly. I think this might be the best I have read of your work. Excellent.

~Ari

Out of all of the poems you wrote is the best. It broght tears to my eyes.
Keep going, you doing great.

I read a few of your poems, and although I don't know much about poetry, I do enjoy the rising and falling feeling of your work. You have a way with words, you can find just the right one to fit an emotion. I know I can never do that without a thesaurus nearby and an "Aha!" moment.

By the way, I know what you mean by "the look". Most of my friends just ignore all the little references I make when I'm so proud of myself for being clever. Guess we're kindred spirits of sorts.

how can u not be proud of ur poems? This makes me feel so... _... idunno, there's just something different about your poems (that's a good thing, don't worry). well, good job.

Wonderfully portrayed and even more dramatically written to depict the emotions that evidently have been real, to some extent. The feelings introjected into this piece of work is extraordinary,

I liked this poem. It reminds me of myself. You had reviewed some of my poems in the past. (You might not remember since I changed my penname) I've written some more poems/stories, and when you can, can you come review them?

Very beautiful. Keep writing.

I'm so glad that you've updated!! :D I *love* this piece ... especially the way it ends: "I just hate it that you know." It's written so well ... I love it! :D Keep up the *great* work!