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| NnieC 2003-05-18 ch 1,   | This is a real good beginning for a story, there is a hint of mystery that keeps the reader captured in your story. The tunnels reminds me of another story I'm reading; it's a twist of Cinderella call "Queen of Glass". I'm sorry, I don't have any ideas for your story; to me it sounds like it would be a story about new beginnings. A hope of beginning a new life after a terrible tragedy/crisis. Yet at the same times it sounds like its going to be a story about the hidden pain and suffering of a group of people and how they survive. Anyways, it seems to me that you are writing about an aspect of society, whether it be good or bad. I hope that this reviews helps you come up with ideas, sorry for not contributing much. Thank you for reviewing. Hope to see this story updated soon. |
| kamikaze899 2003-03-29 ch 1, | cool, go _!! we really should stop saying people's real names.. anywayz, it's really good! ^^ |