Reviews for Elemental Shadows :: version one ::

Reviews For: Elemental Shadows :: version one :: - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

raven 2003-11-10 ch 3, anon.	abuseo...can kei come live in my room? 'cause hes so kewl and and...ya. anywayz, i also think the medallion is kewl (kewl movie 2) and i think that there is no real plot, but iz still kewl. i like the thank us, and i hope that i may get one, one day.
Jewel 2003-07-18 ch 7, anon.	abuseIt good good good god god god! basically this is GREAT! It's so suspenseful my dear Lira!^^ I love it! Will we meet the wolfish thingie again I wonder?^^ and HEY! DAICHI! Kei and Shinta aren't CHILDREN! gr... hehe! It's great! Please keep writting!
Posi 2003-07-15 ch 7,	abuseKarasu Tendo- I'm bringing home a baby bumble bee... 15 minutes later... I'm MOPPING up my baby bumble bee, all gone!! (Is it sweeping? or mopping? or cleaning? what do you think? eh, all?) Jen- Do you believe in magic? well I hope you do! that means you should torture samll animals and become obese! ^.~ ...Sorry, just remembering this anti-McDonalds speech someone did a while back... Those kinds of things stick with ya, ya know? Neil- I like leaves. poke poke Nyssa- It ain't emy's fault, her comp died. ^.^ suck-OPP! Jewel- minor perviness=important. Hey, Emy, do you think Jeannette would like Mana Theater? doubtful and the rope! the rope MUST RETURN!! Lira: randomly knocks over fragile-looking things I like Fred. Matt- Matt, why do you have the pokemon Emy needs? looks at you evilly, even though I'm supposed to be trying to get those pokemon myself accidentally cuts off your thumbs shoot, Lira's gonna kill meh... Razorblade- aww, po bebby... just because everyone ain't as marvy as me is no reason to cry... (be afraid.) Ok, DA STOWY: -good job with da horsee. what's a trew? does that mean no more leather? -I'm not so sure that the threat will come from the West... ¬¬ -"Why weren’t the villages out bright and early" Ah yes, stupid, LAZY villages... (I know it's not your fault, but if you ever go through and re-edit...) -The inn and the pub are MARRIED! NYAHAHAAH! -I want to pitch camp in the middle of town!! Of course, I really AM the non-gender specific royalty of smooth, I dun NEED to act. ^.~ -It's Rope!! It got stuck in a trash can and it's trying to escape!! GO ROPE!! GO! -CUDDLY DEATH! Aii, ya gotta love then Rabites... (ps, do you say "rab-ites, or ray-bites?) -The girl, on the other hand . . . her face was shaped like a French Horn. -swee-hee-heet... I want a pet demon... ^.~ -And Kei IS smart, ain't he? gotta love! Aww, I like the wolfy!! I kinda forgotted what happene din all the chappies before this, though. That could be bad. _ _ I only remember that the leather is evil. cha me, mis bobos perezosos con queso... I swear, I really did complete spanish one!!
Karasu Tendo 2003-07-11 ch 7, anon.	abuseSpringing new characters on me, are ya? glares And what was up with the village? Did I miss it? Am I insane? Okay, the answer to the last is "yes," but I don't know about the other few... It's late and I must mop. ^_^ Still a wonderfully intriguing story, Lira-chan! Chapter eight! Chapter eight! Don't make us wait, give us chapter eight! I could've been a cheerleader.
Rae1 2003-07-11 ch 7,	abuseWhy do I always come into stories late? I'm not -that- slow on the upchuck, am I? Er... update and uptake... I know... old joke. sighs, blinks, and slinks away
Neil 2003-07-11 ch 7, anon.	abuseI kinda got lost in the middle. And i keep doing these favors, maybe it should be your turn poke
Nyssa 2003-07-11 ch 7, anon.	abuseWell, I finally got to read the most recent chapter. I think that the details on what happened with the wolf-dog and Kei were a bit fuzzy, but other than that, I enjoyed it.
Nyssa 2003-07-11 ch 6, anon.	abuseNaivety isn't all that bad...I should know, I'm blissfully naive.^_^ Things are getting really interesting now. Me likes. Evil darkness-thingy? Makes it sound like a Ringwraith.
Nyssa 2003-07-11 ch 5, anon.	abuseI know, I've been bad, not reviewing lately...but I'm reading all of the other chapters today. Is it just my Neil-focused brain, or are the Shinta and the Kei going to fall in love? It's prolly think it's the first thing. ^_^;
The Dark Enchantress 2003-07-11 ch 7,	abuseJust wanted to review. ^_^ Keep up the good work. Your really good. ^_^ Bye.
Nyssa 2003-07-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseA bit slow in the middle, what with the passages and stuff, but got a bit interesting near the end.
Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2003-06-23 ch 6,	abuseOh, Lira-chan! I'm so sorry I haven't been reviewing! sob hangs head in shame But...I really like this, if that's any consolation at all...
Matt_MotA 2003-06-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseAND MATT GIVES ELEMENTAL SHADOWS TWO BIG THUMBS WAY UP!
The Mary (too lazy to sign ... 2003-06-09 ch 6, anon.	abuseChapter six be two chapters in one, just like my reviews are like lots and lotsa shout-outs and a review in ...one! ^.^ --special-- (I've been using the --'s a lot... in my Xanga too) Neil- HAHA NEIL BE WRONG! um, yeah. ^.^ You're a stupid-head. Kei can do any kind of magic he wants, so :P Jen- I have a theory... Shinta did not, in fact, use a waffle iron. No, as a matter of fact, she did not even make waffles. They were actually --get this-- CORN DOGS! They only CALLED them waffles because corn dogs weren't officially invented yet! ^.^ --smart-- I also have a theory about G-ma: she DON'T have magic at ALL! she be the ONLY high-priestess without magic! that would explain why Shinta don't learn any... and why Kei seems to think she be weird. Karasu- VERB! it's what you do! --shudder-- I've had that driven into my head... stupid TV... >.< My verb is FWAP!! fwaps you with a stick FWAP!! hehehe... Nyssa- ^.^ Allison- hi!! hihihihi! Jewel- ^.^ Hi! You save me from lack of human contact soon, mebbe? hm? hm? ^.^ lovebeams Lira- I like your idea about selling the pant-shards on E-bay, but, as much as I adore E-bay, circulating this instruments of evil would be almost as adverse to my moral code as watching a sequel before the original. Almost. Nothing is quite THAT bad. -blissfully ignorant Now ThE SToRy: -LOL! I guess theirselves ARE the only selves they're getting! (It took me a while to work that first paragraph out.) -camping? ...BLAIR WITCH! ^.^ -y0! I g0tz 1337 phyr3-m4k!n9 5k!11z, dud3. chop tree. drop logs. light logs. cook meat. I t311 j00, I 0wnz0r3d th053 und34d 10g5! ok, back to normalcy (or as close as I can get): -"Your grandmother’s temple . . . She’s THAT high priestess." HA! I knew it! she evil! ^.^ --smart-- Ok, Ok, I assume this means gramma is special... - You don't talk enough about the horses, so I guess I have to talk for you. the 1 4 U Shinta's horse is a pinto, all purty and chocolatey-white spotty. His name is Cyndorian. He is very understanding and loves to listen. His hobbies are deep sea fishing, baking, and playing boche. He is in search of a female horse seeking a fun time --and maybe more. Kei's horse isn't a horse at all, it's a giant frog named Cassia, but LIRA didn't think that was important enough to mention. -pub... UNDERAGE DRINKING!! ^.^ lalala... -"Their little conversation probably amused him" because they're like little people who are MARRIED! -"Only a half dozen doors opened off of it, so finding their room was no problem." They only peeked into five of the wrong rooms... -"lecherous leer" Ok, I dunno about the rest of you, but I haven't the SLIGHTEST inkling what "lecherous" means. I dunno... It looks kind of like "Leprachaun" and they're SCARY... That must be it. ^.^ -love... hina... LOVE... HINA... GAH! -"she had expected half-drunken men to be yelling and brawling in the pub. Obviously, that was not the case." Then one of them jokingly asked her if she wanted to buy two fine guard dogs... -"the movements of getting ready to sleep..." um? and those are? does that include Kei watching Shinta "go through the movements of getting reasy to sleep"? O.o m... You should make the shinta more naiver!! Like, insanely so! that would be fun! ^.^ Kei=m... worried Action!! flashes of light shooting out of my compu!! ^.^ joybeams
Jewel 2003-06-08 ch 6, anon.	abuseAH! Kei! no perviness! please! not the poor bebby! lol he's so evil. he MEANT to do that. er... poor Shinta dear. Made to do all the 'dirty' work (in the sense of the difficulty). at least Kei's becoming a LITTLE less pervy now. Oh! please don't let them get hurt Alira dear! (hey look! I read this before Posi/Mary!)^^- AND I reviewed! all proud

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