I'm kinda getting it, and kinda not? *confusedish* I dun know- I'm slow remember? it's good though. I understand that their siblings, guessing they're rivals... and Ankoku is abusing power? well I'm sure it'll make sense when u get to that part of Elemental Shadows!^^ I trust u will make it ALL make sense^^ it's makin' me curiousish... Good luck, me dearie! Keep on writting!

It's like anime and Mercedes Lackey in one! Coolness! ::glomp::

As I've said, you have an amazing talent for description. I'm confused as all hell as to what's actually going on, but it was quite an interesting and rather pretty read. Perhaps I would be able to make a better review if you hurried up and got more of the main story posted? ^_~ The characters' relationship was quite neat, by the way. Very intriguing.

Sounds interesting. Good job.