| Reviews for A Path of Tears |
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mizu no kokoro 5/30/03 . chapter 1wow, that was really good! It had such description and it really moved me! keep writing these! |
Soul of Frodo 5/1/03 . chapter 1 O.O It's rhymed, it's metered, and it has actual coherent content! *falls over in shock*Incredible! My only decent rhyming poetry is either sappy songs or nonsense! *worships* |
Windsong 4/29/03 . chapter 1Wow! This poem is so...inspiring! As usual, I have such a blast reading your writing style, it's so beautiful, and you have a real gift for writing -. And now I feel so optimistic and cheerful! Keep writing, please! -Windy-chan |
Ahrihliir 4/23/03 . chapter 1This is fantastic. It really gives you cause to think about our journey in life, and for me it really summarizes Christianity. I have goosebumps. I don't know if you were going for rhythym or not, but I think you could work on the flow a little. |
Needa S 3/30/03 . chapter 1Awesome job! |
Keep it 100 3/29/03 . chapter 1Great job! Heart of the Sword |