I LOVE this. The formatting was excellent, and the imagery and vocabulary was awesome. I adore. . .
and agree.
-Jessica

this poem shows so much than one can imagine
it is so true that every is an island not just one !!
i wana ask u if i can add you on my messenger

Love the poem. Especially the last part.
yay.

This poem expresses how it feels to be alone very good, and the end is true, especially if you think about it how you never know who you can trust, keep up the good writing!

~Shelila~

Great use of words... the idea is complete and very well created. Again another mature poem. Good job

Hey! I like this. I think the guy in the movie "About A Boy" kept saying that he was an island and yeah... can't remember anymore... oh well, great poem! I love the idea. Sometimes I think I'm an island, but then something happens and I know I'm not. Anyways, I should stop talking now... Oh, one more thing, I like how you did the short little verses in between the bigger verses and how you changed the i/he/she/we thing. It was great.
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams

no man is an island...
but you sure seem to think otherwise...
no that i think about it...
you're right. ^^ *claps*

I really like this one; it was well written and had a good topic.

Sounds like one of those poems that comes out when life sucks, and everything is crappy. I really liked the way that you kept the pace and the repetitions between stanzas was awsome. Keep it up and I'll read more.

-.- I love it! It's going on my favorites...

interesting, i love the idea of it, and its beautifully written, excellent job

This reminds me of the quote "Alone in a sea of people." I love the last line - "No man is an island, but/ Alone/ Here we all are." Once again, you're right on the mark. If only people could see that all those other people out there are just like them, the world would be a better place . . .

Wrote this in chruch? Naughty naughty! You should be listening instead and enjoying ;). Well, either way, it is still amazing!

Yeah, I liked this one.

Basically has a theme and message I believe in strongly, how we hide our real selves and can be alone in a crowd. I like your repeating yet changing stanza, expresses the main thrust of the poem.
I also like the last line of the third stanza 'I have got your soul, the evil one sneers with disdain' - interesting image with a strange reference that can be up for fun interpretation.

oh i like this. very interesting to read, a good idea.