Hey. The story is pretty cool, but there's one thing I don't get... You treat like the rest of humanity, except for two people understand how Tobieaz is feeling. I understand that it would make it more complicated, but the fact that the police... etc keep saying the same thing is crazy. I'm pretty sure people are smarter than that. And the parents of Tobieaz have got to be the most stupid people on the planet. It takes a lot to be a crappy parent, but you have to have some sort of mental disease to be that insensitive. And the whole "Oh my god! That boy's got wings on his back! Kids! Cover yourself! You souls will be stolen by that devil!" That's WAY too much out of proportion. I can't think of a single kind of person who would say that.

This probably sounds more like a rant or a flaming than a review, and I apologize for that. It's just that I can't seem to relate with this story and albeit, this is reality with a twist, but even the normal people - well you just can't relate with anyone. I know you've completed this story so it doesn't really matter what I say as much, but I just thought I'd put my thoughts out there.

~Az

O.O omigosh! im sorry, but how could you! you made him die! *sniff* this is soo sad, but it also is realistic. but still, poor tobi, he died. *cries*

beautiful. i can't wait to see what happens when he returns.

aw

whew! that's good...he was saved by druni.

omigosh! that's so harsh! they can't sever his leg tendons! now he has to escape all over again!

hm...so he finally left that bad city. so where is he now? is it an island?

whoa! totally awesome! keep it up!

oh man. that's horrible. why can't they just leave him alone? even better, he should go find himself an island in the middle of an ocean or something, and live there.

whoo! good thing rohehe was around. she smacked some sense into Tobi. finally!

LOL! sorry. dunno why, but tobieaz's silliness is amusing. i agree with the girl - he should just get over it already.

aiyiyiyiyi! O.o he got beaten up!

yay! john is alive. and go, tobi, go! fly away to freedom!

oh no! tobieaz had to escape again! escape, poor tobi, escape! smash everything to bits and escape!

wow. he's got his own special little place now. so, does he ever fly? i'll probably find out when i keep reading, i guess. so, on to the next chapter!