i liked it, especially the last part. good job ^^

It flows nicely, and then gets choppy, the way the ending ends with mostly a rhyming word, really ties the poem together, very nice. What does rn mean (I have no fluffing idea)
Thanks for review my stuff by the way!
Keep writing!

Good poem i liked it. Check out my stories The Legend of the Red Diamond and The Last Grand Duchesses of Russia.