a long time ago we seemed like just kids out writing and hoping and developing our skills. and now we're out there in the real world trying to figure out our lives. I haven't written since freshman year of college, it seems like so long ago. I was just curious as to what you have been upto honey bee. I haven't talked to you for almost as long as I've written. I ran across Heather's site while I was looking for a link to something else and then I tracked down some of our old writings, yeah for memory lane! hope all is well take care!

Aww...Its been years since you worked on this. It is so good, I wish you had continued. Well, your talented and I hope you pick it up again.!

i think that this story is incredibly AMAZING! u write so well, i totally thing ur gonna be in the papers for ur talent. KEEP ADDING CHAPTERS!

you ended it There? oh EEp! how unfair! oh...fine...it was a very good story. please update...

This is an excellent story. You're a really good writer.

sounds interesting

I hate how parents do that. They don't take part in your life until something bad happens, then they take charge and banish you from what you want.

I really need to stop connecting with these stories...

This...very interesting...indeed something worth reading out. Do continue...

Wow. Really, wow. You really have a talent for writing. I'm sure I'll be seeing your name on a novel one day. I'm really impressed with this story, everything flows so well. In the first chapter, a little of the dialogue seemed kind of forced, but as you progressed, it became more natural. The description is amazing (I love how you take time to tell all about the cars, always gets my heart pounding), and the characters are so real. It's like you plucked people you know and shoved them into your own little world. And your taste in music is magnifique, I must say.
Beautiful job on this so far, keep writing!

i dunno what it is...i just like your story. well done.

I love your writing style. Your descriptions and use of detail really draw the reader into the story. Anyway, it's very intriguing, and I'd love to read more of this.

Hey, good story!! I want to read more!! It's got me hooked!