While I did like this poem, I honestly didn't like the last line. It ended abruptly and didn't match the mood for the rest of the piece. But the rest is really nice, and has great imagery.

hey that's really good! keep doing your thing!

God. What have I done to you?

Lol, jk. It's a gorgeous poem. I think i'm gonna print it out and hang it on my wall or in my locker. Seriously.

aw, sweet poem, thuie...excellent job, as usual! :-) dreaming is good. tres bon.

I didn't like the last line. It was an abrupt ending to poem that was better kept hazy and surreal, like a dream.