Whoa, that was intense. And really well-written. Great job! D

Wow... I'm speechless...(In a good way)

That was... wow. Disturbing but good.

Writing was great, story very quick but good. Creepy but good. Disturbing but good. you sould write more on this guy. Good job!

wow, that was different. it was dark but beautiful

ah creepy! lol nice work

Woe, this is a very interesting piece. I look forward to reading more from you, nice work.

Wow.

Nice work.

I don't say this often, but that was very good work. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Lust

datz sad ;)

Ouch, that last author's note was really blunt. What do you take us for, idiots? Hah, I guess so. Um, thanks for not letting me figure it out ON MY OWN. Jeeze. Whatever. I liked. I rate you .

please keep writing...if thats what you want it is a marvolous story in the making

Extremely beautiful. I read it a lot. It flows perfectly.

it was good. unique and well-written. however, it was a bit rushed. could've had a bit more explanations, or maybe, a little bit more characterization.
the author's note spoiled the whole story for me, to tell you the truth. i don't think there's a need to explain what happens in the story if they don't get it by just reading it.
don't get me wrong, i still stick to what i said before: it's good and unique.
-love, sar

deffinitly different