 Roguechere 2003-08-23 . chapter 1Very nice. The last line is made all the more powerful by the way you have it by itself at the end. |
 Meister 2003-07-31 . chapter 1Great poem. I especially like the part where silence rings so loud, it's nice to see how something is described by its opposite. Furthermore the poem gives me a feeling of loneliness and...well melancholy for lack of a better word...wonderful. Keep up the good work |
 ionlyliveindreams 2003-06-09 . chapter 1Cool poem. I like the feeling I get from it. Very cool. I like the third stanza the best.
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams |
 Amakhania 2003-04-28 . chapter 1wow... really beautiful imagery. And so sad! I know that eerie quiet that seems to come with a blanket of snow.. it's weird and u've described it terrifically! And it works very well with the feeling of, almost acceptance of the sadness because it is so similar to a long and seemingly unending winter. I really liked this poem, great job hon :) |
 Icarus Sun 2003-03-30 . chapter 1I can't say that I like it, but I can't say that I hate it, either. |