hey, when are you planning to post another chapter? i have been waiting for it for a VERY long time... great story. really. so keep updating, k?
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wow. that has to be one of the best amatuer stories i've ever read thus far. the way you use good descriptive words without over using them to sound like your smart. the smug and smart ** characters abound. so far i like kentaro the best, just because i'm more into the characters who don't seem damn near unstoppable but christopher is still very cool. i can almost guarantee you that your family isn't telling you it's good just to shut you up, it's a great story. the part describing their family had a nice realistic feel to it. i just can't see any bad aspect to the story. just as a tip you may want to look back over it to make sure any minor grammatical errors you can take care of in the future. i hope you add more soon. interesting bit for an ending. bye.