Wow, interesting. Sort of twisted, but still cute. I love it! Update soon!

Haha, corny ending. This is well written, I like that twists i it. Update soon!

You know...oddly enough, the twins remind me of Pain and Panic from the Herculese(sp) animated movie...just a random thought there.

yes the first scene, I hope to understand it more soon...xP. DIE ELIAS! ...ok lol/

yes it does seem empty, but that's probably because it lakes a plot.

Well, the chances that you will update this story(or any other) seem quite...small, unbearably so. But, I just thought I'd say I enjoyed the ten chapters of this story very much, and wish it had been completed before I decided to read it. ^^ I wanted to see what happened in the end...but I suppose there's nothing I can do to change the fact you haven't updated in 2 yrs...

WHERE THE HELL IS THE REST OF IT? FIFTEEN CHAPTERS AND THERE ARE ONLY TEN HERE. WHERE IS THE REST?

Love it, Going to finish?

Love it, Going to finish?

Love it, Going to finish?

Love it, Going to finish?

YAY! Although please don't take forever and a day to finish it! ^_^ i have to know what happens!

Yeah, he didn't DIE, he got killed, there's a difference! *sigh* Honestly, people...

OOH...I feel a plot coming on...but I HAVE to point out on thing: Lillias is SUCH a girly sounding name. *giggles* But then, I don't mind girly guys, they make the world a whole lot cuter...^_^

Sort of...but not really empty. Just misplaced, I'm sure your muses will find it! ^_^ And what is this about non-descriptive m/m sex?! Treason I tell you, treason! ^_^