Hey! Okay, I've read the first two chapters (2 & 3) including the prologue. I love this story! Even though it took me awhile to get around to actually reading it, but I'm reading it now! I love it! But, who's writing the journal entry things, and what're the "Matzin 3, Hask 37" things?! What do they mean? Anyway, please continue! ~Mizz Karr-chan

wow i reall like this story.

Very interesting

Wow! This is an excellent story! I absolutely love how I can tell who is thinking...your character development is awsome!! And so are you descriptions, however, I would like to know a little more about what they wear, it would help with the whole mental image. I mean, really, who wants to see Adros walking around naked?!
Eek! Adros is a sniveling little creep. I hope he either dies or turns good and helps the Resistance.
Great story! Hope you update soon!

i like it. update. am grounded and will be caught.

WOW... this is a great read! I hope you update it soon. I'm afraid I'm at a bit of a loss as to who the handsome kidnapper is, darnit! I especially like the way you put quotes at the beginning of your chapters. Oh, and don't worry about the italic stuff, I get that on my account too occasionally. It doesn't seem to have a negative effect on your story at all. It's wonderful!! :) *wants more gosh dangit*

I liked that as a first chapter. The world is rather well fleshed out and the advance of a 'faceless' army is a dark captivating image.

I will return for more when time permits.

Well, that was certainly a worthy investment of my time. When I first saw this story, I looked at the word count and went 'gulp!', but decided to read it.

Half an hour later I'm happy as can be.

I'd make suggestions, but I forgot them all (...), so I'll just say that I like this, and that hot brigands rule. Lol. Update soon, yes?

Coolies! You haven't updated in so long, it took a while to remember who everyone was... yet when I remembered, it sure snapped right to the forefront. ^_^ More Liam in this chapter equates to more good vibes, which helps ease out bad and evil Adros memories and appreciate the fact that Rhisaba's acting rather foolishly. Perhaps the powers made her giddy. Ah well. I wish I could be kidnapped by some handsome guys... *sigh*

Update sooner? *pleading puppy eyes*

Hahahah! Good update! ^_^ I could just hear Katya ranting, then talking rationally, then ranting again. And Rhisaba was certainly acting like an idiot, wasn't she?

Short and pointless. My most common type of review. LOL

ja ne!
LoK

::Shuts her mouth but still manages to giggle profusely::
Well now I can't *say* anything! ::bounces::

You're a wonderful writer, I love your descriptions and the journal entries are very convincing.

Fun! Hehe. I am liking Rhisaba more and more, and your writing style as well. And of course, the thing with the pendants . . . lmao, I like enchanted necklaces too. ^_~

Okay, pointless review. I love this story! Please do update again.

ja,
LoK

Gorgeous style! ^_^ I love some of the little phrases you put in your narrative, like "pitched a fit". That isn't very elegant, but it fit the situation so well and made me laugh; though the laugh didn't distract from the flow of the story at all. Well done. I am eager to continue, and find out more about these extraordinary women you've introduced.

ja ne!
LoK

*claps hands* What a beautifully written prologue! I don't have anything to offer for it - sentence structure, spelling, grammar, all were perfect; and that certainly doesn't happen very often out here. ^_^;; You have definitely sparked my interest to learn more about this world, so I'll be back!

ja ne,
LoK

I thought that was Effec... creepy man. Great work, keep it up.