They sound more like spiteful sprites! I love how you gave them powerful arms, day dreams can have a strong grasp.

That's cool. I don't really think there should really be a reality...well actually but still. You forgot the comma after purple.
I like it. Keep up the good work.

this poem is good; i really enjoyed it. R&R mine puh-leeze

cool ... i like inneresting poems and stories ... that's how i write ... :) nice work!

haha. fairies are cool! ;]

Sounds like a dream...

Wow... Sounds lik an acid-trip!

Great job!

T~H

this sounds like a dream or something...

Alright this one's my favorite of all you've listed here at this site.

Way to go girl! You are on your way to being able to communicate in a lovely way.

Talk soon. Really nice poem.

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I think you should think twice next time you claim you havent smoked weed.
From-Chocolate

sounds like a dream at first and then waking up to reality...I like the contrast, really great.
Thank's for the nice reviews!! ^_^
cio, hoellenwauwau

wonderful poem! nicely written, nice images it paints in my mind. i like the ending... nice job! keep on writing! and thanks for the review!

Nice! 'Can't remember what they said, something about being brave ...' 'Singing about the sea'. Fits well together. Good work.

hey i really like this..reality sucks! and u kno ur rite...living in dreams is way better, and Ive been trying 2 tell people that my whole life...most people are just too caught up in their little worlds to see how wrong they are! anywayz, luv it! keep on writn girl!

Nice job writing the poem. Rhyme works well with this type of poem. Well, I think it sounds great anyway. Don't worry about not remembering when you wrote this. It's still good. ^_^ Keep writing!