  dudetta 2003-04-19 . chapter 1 th |
  softbreeze169 2003-04-02 . chapter 1It's beautiful! I love it! |
 aserene 2003-04-01 . chapter 1okay the rythme is a little too much but i love the poem! Its revealing. |
| ASH 2003-04-01 . chapter 1 I really liked this poem because it is in a boys perspective of what he sees! I like how he can be comfortable in saying that all he has to give is his love. Not many want to WOW a girl with that, but that is all girls really want is luv! |
 Emoshun 2003-03-31 . chapter 1touching. some of the rhyming is cheesy, but overall, WELL DONE. You would do really good with free form :) |
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