Its so beautiful in its horror. Its so awful how children lose their innocence like this and I think you captured the horror wonderfuly.

Oh, nice...
Don't be afraid of touchy subjects. Emotion creates the best poetry. I like this lots. *claps*
(btw, I just reviewed a pic of yours on Elfwood. o.o Check it out, you have an account here, too! Small world. I haven't tackled Cyberseed yet, and I don't think I will until tomorrow.) Keep writing!
-Ursula

i like it, but it seems a little soft for the subject. *shrug* but then again, i know close to nothing about poetry, don't listen to me. all in all i like it.

Wow; you can write. Touchy subject, yes, but very well interpreted. THe emotion is inspiring.

Aw, that's so sad!

wonderful poem

That touched me... Right here. *puts hand on chest* I hope that never happens to me... And shame on the people that do the to little kids...