It has been quite a LONG TIME since I have last read or reviewed any of your work, but as always, you wrote another great one :) This poem is very bittersweet. It makes me feel very sad, but it is reality, it happens. Keep up the amazing work!

*sniff* aww, poor kid. poor dad, poor EVERYBODY! HERE, FLOWERS FOR EVERYONE!

Thats beautiful.

*You used to review my work (Cutadrinalinrush) this is my new sn*

Oh, this one i so sad. That poor little boy. I would hate to have something like that happen.

wow...so sad!! man...i dunno what i would do if my dad went to war. he's not, thank God. thanks for reviewing my piece. yours is really good! you're so talented!

Aw! This is so sad! Great job!

aw.. it so sad! its even worse because things like that do happen.. its really pretty and touching, keep up the nice work

AHH! I LOVE THIS ONE! IT'S SO SAD AND SWEET! i just wanna hug that little boy. he's so innocent and cute! WAH!

Aw.. :(
Heartfelt and bitter.
Innocence plays a big role. :)
Good poem. ^^
Thank you for the reviw, i haven't seen you in quite some time now. ^^

aw, this is such a sweet poem! I loved it. Nice rhyming work, and a lovly job on the 'little kid' act! Great job!

~*~The Goddess of Night~*~

P.s.- thanks for reviewing 'invisible'.

For some reason that last line sent chills up my spine. It's such a sad poem, but a very well written one.

-Seras

*tears up* this is so sad. You have managed to capture the childs innocence,his questioning, and his confusion. This is a very powerful, moving poem

wow this is really sad. its so sad to think that little children are missing their parents, and might not ever get to see them ever again. good job with the poem and thanks for the review

thats sad...*sniffle*

WOW...*cries* Y_Y this was so sad, but very powerful!! Great work!
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