oh silvawen... its very embarrassing 2 admit, but i feel like i need 2 tell u since u sed that u didnt want 2 call this poetry... that made my eyes water a little. i didnt cry or anything. well, maybe.
i dont know if this really happened 2 ur father, & im sorry if i offend u w/ that comment, but it happened 2 mine. it not everyday u find some1 who lost their dad in a bike accident. was he on a motorcycle 2? my dad was. but this seems like it was recent so u must have known urs better, mine died on december 23rd, 1995- 2 days before i turned 9.
im gonna go read ur funny long thing so i can luk manly & tough when my mom gets home. til then!

-Dante

*sniffle* That was an adorable & happy little thing, & then an adorable depressing little thing. Very cute & simple, yet it says so much. I’m sorry.

~*tafi*~

Elfie *hugs* so sad for you. And it IS a good poem. Quit putting yourself down, 'kay?

^_^

elfie
that was luvley

the poem was touching and beautiful. stay strong and cheer up! you are a great poet and it is poetry. do take care...*smiles*

greenz

Omg. Elfie, that was so sad. I never knew that...oh, god i am so sorry. You got me all into tears now! That was a beautiful poem, and of course you can call yourself a poet. It was so sad and beautiful. AND YOU MADE ME CRY! God damn you! The last lines did it for me. I am so sorry hunni, you know you can talk to me and tell me anything if you ever need to.

AW, bubba!
*sobs*sniffs*
i read it 2 my mom and she got all sad!
This is SO FANTABULOUS!
I'm so proud! *sniff*
Becca