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| Loki-Moonwolf 2003-08-01 ch 1,  | abuseYou captured that all too familiar feeling of despair. We writers know it well, but to capture it in it's complex seeming is very defficult. I hope that made sense, it did to me. Good job -Brad |
| Unfinished Author 2003-06-18 ch 1, | abuseGood use of ryhme. Very emotional, sounds like it came from the heart. |
| suicidel angel 2003-05-30 ch 1, | abuseinteresting, i love the line "Pain is no longer pain but numbness" may i borrow it? i'll give you full credit, i just wanna attatch it to my fav quotes |
| Mackenzie Anderson 2003-05-23 ch 1, | abuseSometimes it seems as if we've failed when we're really just starting to win the battle... just a thought. Well done. |
| RNL 2003-04-02 ch 1, | abusePretty amazing stuff! This is so cool. I like your style, you have talent. I know this kinda feeling. Harsh but true! |