A very good example of a maniac. This could be good in a series, only if the guy didn't fry. Just a suggection. Oh and I think you say "I" too much. And paragraphs would help. You did a good job on making the guy seem insane, and that's the glory of it.

Loved the description. That was really, really cool! Is there more?

^_^Great fic:)Very...firey:)hehe. Seriousely, excellent work