Reviews for Naivety Left Behind

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Green Eyed Pixie 2006-11-23 ch 58,	abuseGod this story was such an emotional rollercoster XD I loved it though, Adrian and Dmitri are so cute and sweet =]
Georgie12345678 2006-09-11 ch 58,	abuseI love you! lol. Jk. but i do love this Story. i was crying when i was reading Dmitrie's last POV. but then Adrian came to my rescue in the Epilogue. thanks lol. you should send this out to be published... i really think you should. infact. i know you should. this is published book material. and if you dont keep trying and trying to get this published you'll regret it eventualy. so publish it. please. your story is just amazing. i only have two stories on my 'amazing... speechless' list. their this story and Carrie-sama's story Prophocy. i had to wait a bit after i read the story to review it... as i said... i was speechless. so publish it and keep up you amazing work. bye!
TheSiner 2006-06-16 ch 58,	abuseAmazing.
Prisoner-11 2006-02-04 ch 58,	abuseI figured if I was going to read the whole story in a few sittings, I might as well review a chapter! It was; Lovely. Sweet. Pure. Torture. Thanks.
flights.of.fantasy 2006-01-17 ch 15,	abusealmost forgot, are you going to have a sequel? rawk on.
flights.of.fantasy 2006-01-17 ch 58,	abusebeautiful.. beautiful indeed. love the whole damned thing. how can tyler not possibly be convicted though? and what happened to Xander?.. and adrian's career? so many questions.. but this story rocks. you rawk too (:
D.H. L'Orange 2005-09-27 ch 58,	abusewow! that was REALLY good! very intense! i absolutely loved it! so much drama and angst! seriously, you almost had me crying in the epilogue (b/c you had really convinced me that Dmitri had died... you evil person! i'm sure that you did that on purpose!) Anywho, adding this to my fav's list! : ) DH
oppanielsarim 2005-09-16 ch 58,	abuseDamn that was awesome times a million. One of the best stories I've read in along while. So I thank you far that beautiful piece of work.
oppanielsarim 2005-08-17 ch 8,	abuseWow! Did I mention amazing. I like it. But one thing that bothers me is the whole SEX IS PAIN thing. How could it possibly hurt like that? Unless I'm missing something...Anyways YAY for you! and I'll try to finish the whole thing quickly ^^!
oppanielsarim 2005-08-12 ch 1,	abuseHOLYCRAPWOW!It's beautiful! Supremely crafted, I love it!
Yelizaveta 2005-07-25 ch 58,	abusethis is a great story, and i will always love it. there's only one word that comes to mind when i think of the ending, and it is bittersweet. your writing is pretty good, but the changing pov's was a bit confusing. if this was a book, i would buy it. the plot is very interesting but you might get some negative reations from it, for the people who were screaming Francios and Adrian to get together. well, over-all, i loved this story. keep writing.
Quietly Losing Control 2005-04-23 ch 16,	abuseSQUEE BRAND NEW!I knew I recognised those first two lines. Jude Law and a Semester Abroad isn't their best song but it still rocks.
peanutilover 2004-09-05 ch 58,	abuseI think I'm going to explode, it was so good. Absolutely beautiful. And I'm so glad I know some elementary French, because being able to read that last bit made it so much more perfect. Amazing.
ashmael 2004-09-04 ch 58,	abuseOh...wow. I'm not even sure I can properly convey what I'm feeling right now, but I'm certainly going to try. Firstly, I cried all through the last 2 chapters. And I'm still crying. My eyes are all blurry and I can't quite see what I'm typing, so I hope it makes sense. This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. The love you have for your characters is amazing, and I'm positive that no one can read this without falling in love with them also. There are a few small flaws in it, but the emotions are so deep, and wonderful, that you can completely forget about them. I'm sure for a very long time, if ever, I won't be able to forget about this fic. I think I'm babbling now, so I'll finish this up. Naivety Left Behind tore out my heart, and I don't think it'll give it back. Thank you so much for sharing this with everyone, and please, please keep on writing.
Stefen 2004-09-03 ch 58,	abuseOMG! breathes You made me cry again! Thank you so much for not killing Dmitri! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! This chapter was amazing and the story as a whole... just... wow! I'm speechless! OMG! That rocked! I love those two! So adorable! Love it! I hope you do write a spin-off. You are an amazing author!

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