I love this poem.

One of my faves by you.

I'm not sure what drove you to write a peom about a "dungeon keeper"

I really like this, your rhyme scheme is very creative, i liek how it gets faster towards the end of each line. taht story you wrote must be intersting if this poem were to come of it. This is going onto my favorites for sure Merry Meet and Blessed be.

~William~

*claps* I really liked this one. It kinda tells a story, and a discription. Good job. ^.~*

Very ancient indeed!
I like reading this!
Cool and so effective!
KEEP WRITING!!

haha, that's great! i have to read the dungeon keeper story now..