ugh! it would suck if that happened to me...they seemed...destined
~`~`~Pinky~`~`~

o.. hope you update soon! quick quick.. before i die of suspense! I love your stories!

o0o0o! so sad... yet so happy,

r u going to make more chapters eventually?

heather I'm sorry I should have read it all the way the first time because I read the rest of it and It is a really good story you should write another chapter I want them to met again...that was so kool how they kissed...well laters amy

Wow, such a powerful short story you have produced Heather. First off I have to comment of the way that you have set the story, with seeing it from both points of views of the two characters. You don't learn a lot about them but that adds to the magic which is made when they bump into each other... Curse that bus!

Keep it going Heather!
Luvs,
Jakey

P.S The following was for the chapter 10 of 13th Child I'm not sure if it worked or not so I am saying it again!

It would appear that yet again Heather has weaved her own magic into her wonderful story. Keep it going Heather and keep my enjoyment of reading the vast amount of chemistry and magic which is forming in your story. And it wasn't a boring chapter, it engaged me even more in the story and the plot. I can almost see the characters and hear them speak their words.

Luvs you,
Jakey

PS - Email me Heather