This poem was an excellent metaphore about life. It's very much like the golden age science fiction. I would also like to thank you for reviewing my story. I wrote it because no one understands here, I mean really understands. It was wonderful to find there is someone who does. Someday I'm going to do something to change things, I hope. That's why I write and why I love science fiction. They may hate you for telling it to them bluntly, but sometimes they'll listen to metaphores. Enough about me though. I just wanted you to know how much I appreciated your review. The examples and the imagery in your poem are very good.

Umm...I read this in school. Pretty cool, well done! xNx