That is a very, very interesting start. I like it!

Fun! I love it! Great scenes.

Aww... So sweet. I liked the last chapter, it's probably my favorite. And I also liked how you worked his stepfatehr into the story!!
In chapter 4 when he was going to leave him I was like, NO! DAMNNIT! but then he came back, thank god...
LEe

this was the best, most cute thing EVER - Awesome -I completely love it. It was short, sweet and fabulous !!

oh!! so sweet and loveley
Connor is just so cute~

Aw, that was just awesome. The middle? end? of the third chapter nearly made me cry. I didn't like it though. I love happy endings, but the way that came around just kind of disappointed me. Pretty cliche. But other than that, I love this. Cute. :D

One word and one word only ;) : CUTE

aw! CUTE! I love your characters!
Your story was soo good!

aw. that story was gorgeous.

I was crying so hard in this chapter!

I had scrolled ahead for a bit (I do that sometimes, it's a bad habit) and read some of the sad part and cried a little bit.

Then I went back and read the whole thing and cried even harder!

My dad already thought I was crazy and now my mom does too.

Gee, thanks.

God.
You had me balling my eyes out in this chapter.

when i read this..i thought it will be different like totally different plot..and you just wrote an amazing and beautiful story..and its like just the right length for me to enjoy..and i love the most is when writer writes story that focusing on the main characters..and what they are feeling..because i hate to read other people pov because it can make me confused and bored..and you done a great job and i love this story!! totally adore it!!

Your story is awesome. I can't help but love it over and over again till my time is up. Okay, so its exaggerated but i can't describe. The love between them made me cry the previous chapter. Aww...Literately! I'm so emotional. Thank you so much for the story.

i am so happy! this is one of my favorite stories. i read it yseveral years ago and afterwards couldn't remember the title nor the author. i stopped looking after a while and i just stumbled across it again while reading another one of your stories! yay! for me this is sort of a Slash classic. a classic sappy romance with some angst in the middle but a good ending. and rather well devolped charactors for such a short story.

Amazing story, such a nice ending!
This is definitely going on my favourite stories list. ^^