AH! Cliffhanger, [or is it a suspensehanger?]!1
I love the story so far, and the [suspensehanger as I like to call it] leaves me wanting for MORE! Please? :/

I really like it so far, but I'm kinda wondering where its going. xPP
By the way, it's blew, not blue.
Other than that, nice job. ^^

Hey! That's sorta a cliffie! You can't stop there!

o i love this story. But you havn't updated in like a century (i dont exaggerate AT ALL). I wish Leos' dad would die or something and that bear River gave him was so sweet and cute. =D UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Ha! Read it!

I lurve it. Writing in first person fits your style and for your first slash fiction (?) it's pretty damn good. Now on to chapter 3!

Alright, I'm printing this out to read it, so I can't say if I like it or not. But thus far, I read a few paragraphs and I'm already liking it. I'll give you a much more decent review when I get home and am able to sit down and read this thing properly. At least this will boost your reviews, eh?

Write On!-KT/Draz

omigod, that was so good! please, write more! hmm.. in my opinion, I think River should start looking at Leo in more of a romantic way rather than in a sexual way...

It's kinda sad really. If river's really an angle; well, I don't think his really sincere with Galileo if he just kept having lustful thoughts in his mind 'bout Leo. Sigh. Well, it's a fic and it really seem like he's sincere and well, I just hope it'll be a happy ending^^ I won't say i hate it not I love it but I like it^^ So keep it up and PLEASE UPDATE. hehehe. See ya^^

You should update this. It's really good.

I Like this update soon.

this is so good, keep writing.

i love this story! I hope you dont leave it unfinnished, update soon?

*grins uncontrollably* AN UPDATE! Yipe!! and Hehaww...my friend said I should 'embrace the country in me'. But update! *squeals* I just ADORE River. SOO CUTE! I mean, not even Leo could resist him, I stood no chance. Poor Leo. Don't worry. River will take you home w/ him and take care of u...if u know what I mean, and you're a teenage male created by a yaoi fan, so u should. Okay I need sleep. Haven't slept in DAYS. UPDATE MORE!! Don't leave us!!

*angels sing in background* YOU UPDATED! happiness! well anywhoo... that was short but hilarious!

AWESOME chapter! I really love this pair.