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| failte200 2006-11-22 ch 1,   | Uhm... yeah. That's a lil' dark. Oh, good... excellent even but for the lack of any spark of redemption or hope. I.E. - dark. Lesse yer other stories and see if you're always like this... |
| Modern Actide 2006-06-18 ch 1, | Lords, you're a good writer. I've read all you fiction now, but I love the one-shots the most. They make me want to cry, but I still love them. |
| genny marie 2004-11-14 ch 1, | THIS WAS ABSOULTELY AMAZING it was amazing you have a way with slash - xoxo meg |
| subtleline 2004-08-29 ch 1, | Well, this is one of the first fics I've read written from the rapist point of view. Very interesting. Very well written. Very well done. I like it. |
| Hortie 2003-12-24 ch 1, | Whoa. This was pretty hot. :D Your style is solid (need I even mention grammatical correctness et al?) and I like the second person POV. I'm just a sucker for darkfic and domineering sadists. Yum! |
| Anoyo 2003-08-23 ch 1, | Very good. You have a certain nack for the second perspective. The explaining away and non-regret of the actions was all quite realistic. Love gone bad; you somehow took a much worked-upon and stereotypical story idea and made it something to ponder. Job very well done. Ann |
| LoveSasa 2003-06-27 ch 1, | Wow... Just... wow. ~Mizery Rose~ |
| Triste Vara 2003-05-18 ch 1, | That was a little...disturbing. But very good. Like you said, it was raw, but still, very good. |
| succubusbroad 2003-04-22 ch 1, | I liked it. There aren't enough rape fics out there, thanks. |
| Jennifer L. Rawles 2003-04-12 ch 1, | sick but good fic |
| demonic-muses 2003-04-11 ch 1, | Wowza.. me likes... :D very dark. but very good. yes yes!! bwahah.. me likes alot alot alot. Puck |
| Emmasj 2003-04-10 ch 1, | Damn... That was... Well, I feel bad about liking that, but I do. It was a very well written story. Good job. You scare me. ~Emmasj |
| sista' blacksheep 2003-04-08 ch 1, | that's so sad...wow. Very impressive. you are very gifted at conveying a visual story completed with an intense and unusual amount of well expressed feelings. It was very convincing..or at least for me since I know a friend who's brother did the same thing to him.. or at least the same thing according to what I gather form our conversations. Thanx for posting this, it was good to finally see the other side to an abusive relationship as opposed to just the victim's point of view. Now I know...if what you write is generally true. Keep up the good work author! |