,.this is really a great story,.please update soon,...

Let's see, as these stories go, this is rather mediocre. While I generally don't mind reading the "girl crossdresses as guy" stories, this one seems particularly unrealistic. First, I would wonder how they could see Yuki's good grades but not notice that she was female, unless they didn't happen to state it on her...grades report, or whatever they looked at.

Assuming that this was what happened, I also find Yuki's motivations odd. Why wouldn't she want to go to an all girls' school? And why would she say she would rather go to an all guys' school when she is clearly explained to be timid around males? The motive doesn't add up, or it would imply that Yuki is either harbors some sort of hate for her own gender, or she really does like guys a lot.

I prefer these types of stories to have a stronger main character, and for the story to be more interesting, and less generic. The more unique it is, the more I usually like it. I'm surprised that so many people seem to be reading this, although I admit that the quality of the writing is good and there are virtually no typos. I guess people want something comedic and entertaining, rather than a solid plot and a unique story.

Keep writing; I hope you aren't too irritated at my criticism. Your grammar and spelling is great. Many times I've seen stories that had a foundation of good plot and idea, but the performance came out garbled and confusing. This story is easy to read and understand, and even though I don't like the plot and characters much, the author's definitely a good one.

Love it..(^_^)

Update soon and add a little suspense please..it keeps me on the go to read stories more...excitingly (^_^)

Heh. Nice story so far! I like Yuki and her mom's relationship, it's quite interesting. ^^ Please update as soon as you can! Lot's of cookies,

Rain

update update update! :)

Yay! A very good story! GO you!! Go you!!

Wow! Love it. I never read the original, but I'm sure this will be better.

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Cool story! Please update soon!

XD Totally awesome! (plese x cuse the lack of up to date language...)

strange idea. but good story.

I wonder whats going to happen to them...haha lolz So far this story is great, please update soon!~

Good, good, good, good, good. Please write more! But how is she gonna get out of trouble in gym or in locker rooms or somethin'? That'll be tough.

But having Ryo for a room-mate... yeesh. I must admit, Yuki sounds a bit...erm... "girlie". Caring about her ahir color and length? Being uncomfortable around boys? That does sound a bit like a girlie-girl. OH well.

I like it. Please write more. But why would her mom dye her hair?

it very good so far keep up the work and write more

HAHAHAHA! This story is hillarious--I love her mom. Question: Is her hair supposed to be naturally an aqua colour? (I ask because it says her mom died her eyebrows as well, so I wasn't sure if maybe she just had blonde eyebrows or something or if she really had aqua green hair) Please update!

-^_^- Pretty please? With ice cream on top? ...and a cherry?

OMG.. i LOVE this story so much!!.. its so funny!.. :]..i really hope you update soon!