though i can't quite empathize here, seeing as i've never had the chance, i can get the emotion in here like it's my own, and it makes for an excellent poem. it is truly a marvelous thing when a reader can agree with you even when they don't quite understand. very nice! keep it up!

Oh, the betrayal. The lies and pain. The ache and hurt. I know this well. Lovely write.

It flows very well, especially with the repetitions. I think this could be made into a song. You expressed the feeling of loss very well, I liked how part of the poem was devoted to what the narrator remembered of the relationship and the other part was how/why the relationship ended. Wonderful imagery ^__^

Keep writing! Peace ~~>