That was good. I didn't really get the second verse though

I really like all the metaphors in the poem. It made it a bit confusing but by the end everything came together and made sense.

Hehehe, good good ^_^! I remeber in elementary school, i would fake sick ALL the time! Nice job!


~DragonElRojo

Really good... I like it. :)

Oh, btw, you wrote 'Of Damsels and Dragons' for FF7 fanfic, right?? I read your fanfic somewhere else (and I absolutely love it!) and I remembered your nick. Kudos for that one too!

Lol.

So this is the one you were talkin about.
Pretty good Mint, Keep up the good work.
Seraphim16(aka Dmacbeth15)

very nice...not as good as you're FF8 ones, though.

i have one thing to ask. Being from australia, and only having the subtle but never-the-less more useful Metric system, how hot is 103 degrees exactly?

(Is it the metric system? I have a nagging feeling that i'm talking about the other one...oh well. you know what i'm talking about)

This little piece is a cute reminder of the human condition, but 'shaken, not stirred'? O_o

Simple, effective, and fun to read. Nice!