Beautiful, and completely human. Actually, the little girl you describe kind of reminds me of myself as a kid--Among multiple other reasons, I once threw up after riding a merry-go-round, and my mother never let me ride another one ever again. And you know that when you've got me thinking about barfing and smiling notsalgically at the same time, you've got one heck of a piece. Great job!

Another beautiful piece! There were so many lines in there that I adored.
'She proclaims the flowers her subjects as she was dubbed Queen of the Marigolds and Lilies.'
'Their pointed fingers cause her soft green eyes to mist and her crown of daises fall as her head bows down.'
- Possibly my favorites.
Again your writing is so original. The emotions you receive from this story are so real. The childish innocence and how some people can be cruel in there ways when they don't wish to understand. It was touching and you were wonderful in describing and making the character. It is as if she were real. You have slammed me back into the 'Wowness.' I just can't believe someone can write so well. You are able to affect readers with your writing, even with a piece as simple as this. Even in that it is not so simple. I would like to see anyone try to write about the same subject and manage to make it so touching.
The last line was perfect as an ending and the overall affect was wonderful. Leaving you with the wish to be like this child who takes joy in such simple beautiful things, while the world can't understand.
^_~ ~DI

Hi your story is so touching. I love it keep up the good work and please come read my stuff

rock on, glitter child. ^-^