i liked how this story had a realistic ending, like it wasn't the cliche crap where they just all end up getting a 'happy ever after'. although i must admit that there were a few cliches, here and there, but whats a love story without one ey ? the musicians struggling to make it thing isn't really my thing but i still enjoyed this story quite a bit so thanks :)

hey, i liked it, and some spit shine and polish could put it on the shelves at your local library, ;) even for early work this stuff is good, your characters are so real...

posterior is such a sexy word... ;)

im somewhat interested in checking out your website, is it still around?

your stories frustrate me so...

everyone has their own problems, but in travis' shoes, the girl that he actually has feelings for scares the living shit out of him, he doesnt know where to start with her without the intense fear he will screw it up...

jilly may be your most, um well rounded character in this story, despite the the lack of exposure she has had(pun unintended)...

the biggest asshole she knows turned out to be the best one to turn to

ok... i know you wrote this a long time ago, but why the heck are all of your male characters complete assholes? I mean come on, shes an emotional wreck so he kisses her? holy shit... ok, but i admit ive been in his shoes and done the same thing...

cue the sleepy jess...

Geez, I'm freakin angsty enough without reading this stuff...but i just cant stop...

wow, bad turn for jilly, and wow...i just realized how massive this story is! ill get it down eventually...

suzy overreacts

hmm...

yeah, suzy is too nice of a girl to be ensnared by mr. ladiesman... that whole thing girls do with guys like that, try to change them... doesnt usually work so well, i guess ill see though...