WOW! This is way better than my story, what were u talkin about? Reven Syawla is nothin compared to this. Even the introduction to this is so good! Man, one chapter for such a long time. This is one good story. Took me 1hr and 30min, I think, to read this. Very detailed! Keep it up! You have been added to my authors list!

this story sucked...no im just kidding its a good story keep up the great writing

squall

It's very long...and interesting! This one's going to my favorite story list. ^_^ Keep it up!