   KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 23YAY! *big grin*
This story was great, if a little fast paced plotline-wise (the changes that Jess goes through, the love that blossoms between them, etc). I enjoyed it greatly though - just read the whole thing straight through. :-) The last two chapters were definitely my favourites - you handled their differing emotions very well indeed. :-)
An excellent story, well written, lots of suspense and intrigue. :-) |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 22 *sighs* YAY! :-) That was a beautiful chapter - so full of emotion, drawing the reader on. Brilliant. My favourite chapter so far. |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 21 YAY! I was right... kind of. :-) |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 20 Yay! I have the distinct feeling that there's gonna be some happy faces... |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 19 WOOHOO!! 'nuff said. |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 18 NO! (I resisted the temptation to look further on when I wrote this) |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 17 :-o NO. Just... NO! |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 16 :-o
I didn't expect Lennex to have done THAT.
:-o
I love the gunshots bit though. Imagine his surprise! "Hmm, didn't think I was THAT bad a shot." LOL |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 15 NO!
Oh dear. :( |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 14 Yay! He's repented, and she's in love. :-) |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 13 Wow. Talk about an abrupt reversal of roles! :-) That was a little sudden... |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 12 Tell him! :-) |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 11 Cool. Jess is reading what she needs - good stuff. :-) |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 10 :-o Oh dear. But yay! Jess wants to protect Nate! I wouldn't want to be in the shoes of anyone who gets in her way... |
| KimHua 2006-01-20 . chapter 9 Hmm... I don't like Lennox. |
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