That was a beautiful story. It's going on my Favourite Stories list deffo.

However, some of the parts were a little confusing.

Hey, that was a good story. Quite raw (emotionally) at times, but compelling nonetheless. :-)

wow, i definitely enjoyed that. fantastic work! :D keep up the great writing.
i do hope you continue that awesome story of yours you put on hiatus. you're a great writer, capable of great endings, and i'd love to see "mission for God" come to a conclusion just as good as this one.
keep writing, using your talent for God. He is the only one worthy, is He not? :D

You are so incredibly amazing. I love you work so much. You posses so much talent. Having the ability to write with such feeling and understanding is such a gift and you are so lucky to have that. I hope that someday I could be just as talented. You truly make people, through your writing see and understand, but most importantly you make them feel. Truly you are beyond all words amazing with your work. I love this story so much. The last chapter confused me a little at first. I wasn’t quite sure exactly what she was in the way of jobs. But I figured it out real quick. Keep up the amazing work and I hope to read more wonderful stories from you in the future.
(@)~^~ Sguitar103

amazing! I loved it, a few parts in the middle i was shaky on, as you know, how much he knew from God, but this? this is great!

Wonderfully beautiful... that's really amazing that it all actually happened at your church! I bet that was something... I'm glad you decided to tag on this epilogue; it gave the story so much more closure that I wanted. :)

Congratulations on finishing this wonderful work of redemption, re-birth, and love in its rawest form. You're awesome!

Absolutely wonderful. I just loved this story... and now I need to go read the epilouge, but I just wanted you to know how much I've enjoyed reading this wonderful story. I can only say that you have an amazing talent, and I'm so glad that I get to partake of it.

Your descriptions were aptly chosen, and I think that your dialogue came out very believable as well. Excellent work!

Okay, I actually have a couple of things to point out here. Firstly, at the very beginning of the chapter, I just LOVED the way you twisted the plot around with Alexia going home. Secdonly, I love the way you've made Deanna such a sweet character in such a short passage of time. A truly wonderful story... *sigh* last chapter next!

Gorgeous, gorgeous chapter. As usual, you've managed to tug on the heartstrings and jerk them around at your disposal. I just can't go around the way you word things so perfectly to capture the emotion you're aiming exactly.

Well once again you've done it and I'm left practicly speechless- practicly is the key word. This was absolutly awesome. At first I was a little worried because the story was ending faster than I expected, but now I see I was worrying about nothing. This has been a rolloercoaster of emotion and has been a blast to read. Thanks for the present at the end, it was more than I ever could have even imagined. (You should have seen me clapping after this story was over!)

Wow... that rocked my socks off. But... is this the end? Wait of course it is, epilogue, duh... *thonks head* Forget my rambling. Great story!

All I can say is wow. You are an amazing writer and I love how you turn words into a work of art. You caught my attention right away and kept it the whole time. Wow.

Hey, I like this so far, it's very interesting. I decided to read one chapter a day... you know, with college being so crazy and stressful. It was nice talking to you the other day (was that yesterday, I can't seem to remember?) Keep on praying, God will show you His will for you.

This sounds interesting, you've definitely got me intrigued. I want to keep reading, but I know I need my sleep. Class in the morning. God bless.

aw...how sweet...i wish it wasn't the end though **cries** lol