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| Eternally Exiled 2004-07-17 ch 1,   | First off, I'm no believer, so you may not value my opinion and I understand. With the focus on God, it's not like anything I'd heard before. That is both refreshing, and a bit awkward. It's hard to feel the emotion in this poem though, most likely because of the faith gap, but none the less feels more like a sermon than an expression of emotion. Just my two cents, and a long two cents they are... |
| cosmo-queen 2003-07-13 ch 1, | Hehe, I loved those little "ooh yeahs!" Now onto the poem, which was excellent, as usual. I loved the message of this and especially the stanza: "We’ll all feel just like David – We’ll suffer and feel pain, We’ll face the consequences of this world… But never fear, for he is with us still!" Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Brooke ORiley 2003-04-19 ch 1, | oh, nice. always encouraging to find people who aren't afraid to post poems to God. wish i could, not my style. i go for the subtle christian theme in stories, it still works, and encourages nonbelievers to read, too. go you! keep up the good work |
| The Nut 2003-04-09 ch 1, | nice poem. parts of it flow a bit like Tehillim |
| Needa S 2003-04-08 ch 1, | Excellent tribute! Keep on, keep on writing for our Lord.. |
| Keep it 100 2003-04-06 ch 1, | Awesome work! A great tribute to our Father. ~Heart of the Sword |
| God's Warrior 2003-04-05 ch 1, | It's good to see someone else out there who loves the Lord. I like this song. It's just too bad I can't place music to it. Maybe someday you'll become a singer for Him and I'll be able to buy your CD. Hey, you never know. It might be your calling! God bless and continue the great work! |